Talk:Battle of Sembabule/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 10:28, 26 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Why is Uganda linked while Tanzania isn't in the lead?
 * Both now linked
 * Tanzania had repulsed a Ugandan invasion in late 1978 Link the invasion.
 * Done.
 * coup that overthrew the President of Uganda, Milton Obote Link President of Uganda.
 * Done.
 * Remove the second "however", two "however"'s are maybe a little bit too much in a short article like this one.
 * Done.
 * Is there a link for both "Tiger Regiment"s in the lead and body?
 * No, and there's very little information about this unit.
 * Same as above for 205th Brigade.
 * Same as above.
 * whereby the the 205th Brigade would maneuver as an entire American maneuver.
 * Anglicanised.
 * The brigade met Ugandan resistance at Sembabule, marking the beginning of a three week-long battle Little bit wordy here. So the brigade met the exiles but the exiles didn't fight in the battle? Also "three week-long" needs a hyphen.
 * Revised.
 * The the 205th Brigade encountered double "the".
 * Fixed.
 * whereby the the 205th Brigade would maneuver Again double "the".
 * Fixed.
 * Regiment at Sembabule, beginning a three week-long battle Again "three week-long".
 * Fixed.

Infobox
 * Maybe add "early" before March?
 * Well it could have been early or mid March, I'm not really sure.
 * Maybe change the tilde into "c." in the infobox?
 * Done.
 * "5 April 1979" --> "5/6 April 1979" Because we do not know which source is correct.
 * Done.

Images
 * There are none.

Sources That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 10:28, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Lubega's source hasn't an access-date?
 * Added.
 * "War in Uganda: The Legacy of Idi Amin" Doesn't need a Google Books URL.
 * Removed.
 * Shouldn't Thomas' source have an access-date?
 * Added.
 * I've responded to your comments. -Indy beetle (talk) 23:10, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 09:54, 29 September 2019 (UTC)