Talk:Battle of Velestino/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:31, 25 July 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:31, 25 July 2019 (UTC)
 * External links OK, no DABs
 * Most images need a PD-US tag including the CC0 images
 * Done.
 * Link Thessaly
 * Where? It is already linked in the lede, infobox, and first occurrence in the body.
 * were mobilized again I don't think that mobilized is the right word here
 * Fixed.
 * engineers or engineer? It's usually the later in English when used as an adjective.
 * Fixed.
 * Are Evzone battalions really notable?
 * They were independent formations, established in the 1860s and not integrated into regiments until 1913, so I'd say they warrant an article, or at least a link that will point to some overarching article (lots of work remains to be done at Evzones)...
 * We generally don't find individual battalions notable, but if you can find a really good history of all the Evzone units...--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:18, 24 August 2019 (UTC)
 * close order formation hyphen between close order
 * Done.
 * danger of being cut off by the Rizomylos stream Not sure what you mean here
 * Clarified, hopefully.
 * quiet on that day delete "on"
 * Done.
 * Down to 29 April, more late.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:10, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
 * What's a sappers-firemen company?
 * Clarified, hopefully.
 * The rest looks good.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:11, 17 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi Sturmvogel 66, any further comments/suggestions? Cheers, Constantine  ✍  14:10, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
 * No, not that I can think of.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:18, 24 August 2019 (UTC)