Talk:Battle of Yanshi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:13, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:13, 6 May 2016 (UTC) Where are we on this?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:25, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
 * No DABs, external links OK.
 * Image properly licensed.
 * by the general Yuwen Huaji, in May 618 move the comma after 618
 * Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:49, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
 * thanks for the heads up, I had totally forgotten about it :). Regarding "by the general Yuwen Huaji, in May 618", I've rephrased it to make it clearer. Is there really nothing else? Cheers, Constantine  ✍  07:43, 30 May 2016 (UTC)
 * the canal, and already before dawn his army crossed over and deployed the word "already" and the comma seem rather pointless here.
 * Oh, and make sure that all of your titles are in title case.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:05, 30 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Prose fixed. Re the titles, I assume you mean the chapter headings. These are actually written so in the original, cf. . Cheers, Constantine  ✍  15:54, 30 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Chapter titles or not, they should be consistent with book titles.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:26, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Done. Constantine  ✍  14:13, 4 June 2016 (UTC)