Talk:Be All My Sins Remember'd/GA1

GA Review
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The article looks good. Here are my comments: I'll give you a week to fix this. Good luck! :) The Le ft  orium  17:35, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
 * The episode is the conclusion to "This Mortal Coil" – this is mentioned later in the lead so I suggest you remove it.
 * and aired on Sky One in the United Kingdom on 8 January – this is an "American" article so the date should be January 8.
 * Spell out "don't" in the plot section.
 * The episode used an extent of special effects and had one of the highest budgets in the entire series, comparible with the series' pilot episode "Rising" – this should be moved to the visual effects section.
 * "Rising" is a disambiguation page.
 * who has not appeared in the series since season 3's twelfth episode – change "3" to "three"
 * firing to the Asuran homeworld in the season 3 finale - same as above
 * since the 1.5 rating of the season 3 finale – same as above
 * aksed -> asked
 * TV -> television
 * IMDb is not a RS, I'm sure you can find a better reference for that.


 * Thank you for your review, I have just fixed all but the last issue (I think). I'll see what I can do about finding another source about the award. -- Matthew R Dunn (talk) 18:18, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Done. -- Matthew R Dunn (talk) 18:38, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Looks good, I'll pass the article. — The Le ft orium  19:09, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you. :) -- Matthew R Dunn (talk) 19:20, 6 January 2009 (UTC)