Talk:Beat Goes On (Madonna song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 08:24, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Calvin999 and I am reviewing this article.


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 * It was written by Madonna, Pharrell Williams and Kanye West, while production was done by The Neptunes and co-production was handled by Madonna. → It was co-written by West in collaboration with its producers, Madonna and The Neptunes.
 * only Pharrell Williams and → Pharrell has already been mentioned so you need not mention his full name again, just his surname.
 * with a different lyrical content than → with different lyrics to
 * also having additional vocals by Kanye West. → featuring West.
 * , also featuring bells, handclaps and whistles. → Instrumentation consists of hells, handclaps and whistles.
 * encourage → encourages
 * to say whatever they like and do → to say and do
 * environment → Just doesn't fit in.
 * However, some dismissed the album's version, criticizing West's appearance. → However, some felt that the leaked version was better than the final version featuring West.
 * Pharrell Williams and Kanye West also appeared on the backdrops. → I think this is almost irrelevant, but if you want to keep it in, omit their first names and clarify what you mean by backdrops.
 * The live version was also featured → The live version was also included
 * announced that record producer → announced that record producers
 * The pre-chorus had Madonna singing → I'd re-word this
 * track, with → alongside
 * with additional rap by West → with rap vocals by West
 * I think the Reception section is too WP:QUOTEFARM.
 * Omit West's and Williams' first names in the Live performance section.
 * Why is Chad Hugo not mentioned in the Credits and personnel section? He is the other half of The Neptunes.
 * Peak positions are supposed to be listed in separate tables if they were different years.
 * Publisher parameters are no longer required for references.

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Generally well written. There some issues with phrasing etc. but not severe enough to fail. On hold for 7 days. — Calvin999 09:23, 4 June 2015 (UTC)
 * did all of them, just waiting for the Checklinks one. Please take a look. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat  ] 11:01, 4 June 2015 (UTC)
 * They are still showing as dead links. — Calvin999  11:03, 4 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I haven't changed them yet. Checklinks tool is not opening from where I'm accessing internet. Would you please list the two urls here? — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat  ] 11:25, 4 June 2015 (UTC)
 * They are ref 16 (pluggedin.com) and ref 24 (abcnews..go.com) — Calvin999  11:46, 4 June 2015 (UTC)
 * replaced both the deadlinks, and done. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat  ] 13:24, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

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