Talk:Beautiful (MercyMe song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:38, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

Taking over again here. Here are the issues I found:
 * The lead's a little on the short side. I get the article's a short one but an extra sentence or so from the background could be useful.
 * Done
 * The composition feels a bit lacking, but if that's all you can find then nothing more can be done there.
 * Merged it with the 'background' section.
 * "Kevin Davis of Christianmusic review" Christian Music Review appears to be three separate words based on the ref.
 * Done
 * Fix the number prefixes per my note in earlier GANs, though it doesn't seem too bad here.
 * '''Done;;;
 * Since the music video's already a reference and noted in the article, the External links section is redundant.
 * Done

I'll put the article on hold and pass when fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:18, 26 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good now. The background and composition sections in this case actually do look way better combined, so good move there. Article now passes as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 17:38, 26 December 2011 (UTC)