Talk:Beautiful Garbage/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 15:01, 28 January 2015 (UTC)

I'll review this over the next few days. --Coemgenus (talk) 15:01, 28 January 2015 (UTC)

Checklist

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * In general, this looks very good. Citations, stability, NPOV, and breadth of coverage are all good. Images are all fair use, and I think the fair use rationales are appropriate.
 * The "World tour" section has some issues with tense. At time it sounds like you're writing as if the tour is ongoing.
 * "Critical reception" has the same problem in places. ("He adds" rather than "he added," for example.)
 * There are some one-sentence paragraphs in the last section that could probably be combined.
 * , all three done. Lapadite (talk) 04:02, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
 * I made a few more minor changes, but I think there's nothing else that needs fixing. Great article, I'm happy to promote it. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:12, 29 January 2015 (UTC)