Talk:Beautiful People (Chris Brown song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 05:41, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * "...Brown's fourth studio album F.A.M.E. (2011) on March 11, 2011." - The "2011" is not necessary with date at the end of the sentence
 * ✅ Ozurbanmusic (talk) 00:39, 14 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Background and composition
 * "Beautiful People" was released for digital download from March 11, 2011." - Change "from" to "on"
 * "An extended play featuring additional remixes of the song, was made available..." - Add comma after "play"
 * "Beautiful People" has R&B influences." - Start sentence with something besides song title to avoid repeating too much
 * Add an audio sample as reference according to WP:SAMPLE.
 * ✅ Ozurbanmusic (talk) 00:39, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
 * According to WP:SAMPLE, the length of the audio file needs to be less than 10%. Please edit the file to make it less than 10% of the original recording. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 00:49, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm confused. Maybe I should get someone else to upload a sample? Ozurbanmusic (talk) 01:10, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Critical reception
 * No issues


 * Chart performance
 * "Overall, it is Brown's fifth top-ten UK hit as a lead artist." - Needs reference
 * ✅ Ozurbanmusic (talk) 00:39, 14 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * No issues


 * Track listing
 * No issues


 * Credits and personnel
 * No issues


 * Charts and certifications
 * No issues


 * Radio and release history
 * No issues


 * References
 * No issues

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are many minor issues that are affecting the prose quality of the article. Other than that, a reference is needed for one statement and an audio sample is needed for the song. I will give you the general seven days to fix the mistakes and/or debate the items you believe do not affect GA status. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 20:12, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * OVERALL REVIEW
 * I have re-uploaded the audio file to make it follow the rules of WP:SAMPLE. Because all of the issues have now been addressed, I now feel confident to pass this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 01:33, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Ozurbanmusic (talk) 01:36, 14 July 2011 (UTC)