Talk:Beautiful Trauma/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 06:03, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Big article, will start on it soon though. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:03, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Use bullet points instead of flatlist in the infobox ✅ removed the flatlist
 * We do not note executive producers anymore after a discussion closed on this; also, there are too many named right now in general ✅ Removed 4 producers who were less involved
 * Remove wikilink on studio album ✅
 * "the completion of her The Truth About Love album" → "the completion of The Truth About Love" ✅
 * "Developed over a three-year period" → "Developing over a three-year period" ✅
 * "a pop album, Beautiful Trauma also" → "a pop album, it also" ✅
 * "Lyrically, the record primarily reflects" → "The lyrical content primarily reflects" ✅
 * "The album received generally mixed" → "Beautiful Trauma received generally mixed" ✅
 * "many of whom praised its overall production" → "many of whom praised the overall production" ✅
 * "some thought the album was" → "some thought it was" ✅
 * "questioning its originality" → "questioning the originality" ✅
 * "Beautiful Trauma debuted at number one on the" → "The former debuted at number one on the" ✅
 * Target platinum to RIAA certification ✅
 * "after moving one million units" → "for sales of 1,000,000 certified units" ✅
 * "reached number one in over ten countries" → "reached the summit in over 10 other countries," per MOS:NUM ✅
 * "Australia, Canada, New Zealand, United Kingdom, and Switzerland, and top-ten" → "Australia, Canada, New Zealand, Switzerland, and the United Kingdom, and top 10" ✅
 * "Beautiful Trauma was among the best-selling albums of 2017 and 2018" → "it was among the best-selling albums of 2017 as well as 2018" ✅
 * "has sold over three million units worldwide" → "has sold over 3,000,000 units worldwide" ✅
 * "as a lead single to commercial success" → "as the lead single from Beautiful Trauma to commercial success" with the wikilink added like here ✅
 * "eight countries and peaking within the top-ten in a dozen others, while reaching number thirteen" → "8 countries and peaking within the top 10 in 12 others, while reaching number 13" since MOS:NUM says comparable values need to be consistent ✅
 * "The second single from the album, the title track," → "The second single, the title track," with the appropriate target added ✅
 * "performed moderately and reached top forty" → "was moderately successful and attained top 40" ✅
 * "of over ten countries" → "of over 10 countries" ✅
 * "had a limited release" → "had limited releases" ✅
 * Sure you shouldn't mention the release months of the other three singles, since that is notable? But not exact date like the lead single. ✅ Added months of release
 * "which ran from March 2018 to November 2019 and grossed over $390 million" → "that ran from March 2018 to November 2019 and grossed over $390,000,000" ✅
 * "Beautiful Trauma received two Grammy Award nominations for Best Pop Vocal Album and Best Pop Solo Performance for "What About Us" at the 60th and 61st ceremony." → "It received a Grammy nomination for Best Pop Vocal Album at the 60th ceremony, while "What About Us" was nominated for Best Pop Solo Performance at the [[61st Grammy Awards|61st ceremony]." ✅

Background

 * "with approximately seven million copies sold worldwide" → "having sold approximately 7,000,000 copies worldwide" ✅
 * "that Pink signed a new multi-album deal" → "that Pink had signed a new multi-album record deal" ✅
 * "a collaborative album titled rose ave. with Canadian singer-songwriter Dallas Green under" → "a collaborative album titled rose ave., with Canadian singer-songwriter Dallas Green, under" ✅
 * Mention that the release was in October 2014 ✅
 * "decided to take a break from" → "decided to take a hiatus from" ✅
 * "However, during this time, she released some songs," → "However, she released some songs during the hiatus," ✅
 * "thirteenth season" → "13th season" and target to The Ellen DeGeneres Show (season 13) ✅
 * "for the soundtrack of" → "that was featured on the soundtrack of" ✅
 * "that she was in the writing process for" → "that she was going through the writing process for" ✅
 * "through a post on her" → "via a post on her" ✅
 * "about a potential release during the latter half" → "about a potential Pink release during the later half" or maybe even "second half"? ✅
 * "pushed back to the following year" → "pushed back to 2017" ✅
 * "child, a son, Jameson Moon Hart, on" → "child, a son named Jameson Moon Hart, on" ✅
 * Can you mention that the nature of the music video was unknown at the time, since it otherwise sounds like one for the album rather than a song?
 * , Should it be something like "The singer announced in July 2017 that she was filming a music video for an unknown song at that time"? – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 16:31, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Not exactly that but something similar; mention it was not a known song but "at that time" is probably not the best to be included here. --Kyle Peake (talk) 17:36, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Added "for an upcoming single", I think that should be enough to cover the unknown nature of the song. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 08:07, 9 June 2020 (UTC)


 * "She later shared a video from the set" → "Pink later shared a recording from the set of the video" ✅

Writing and inspiration

 * Img needs alt text ✅
 * Add a ref to back up the main text's quote, also the text needs a fullstop at the end ✅
 * "the longest Pink has ever worked" → "the longest that Pink has ever worked" ✅
 * "except for dumb sad stuff."" → "except for dumb sad stuff"." ✅
 * "she considered her career hiatus beneficial, helping" → "Pink considered her career hiatus beneficial, citing it as helping" ✅
 * "During the break, the singer has" → "During the hiatus, the singer" ✅
 * "saying that her main focus was" → "saying that the main focus was" ✅
 * "honest as I could."" → "honest as I could"." ✅
 * "the 2016 United States presidential election, and" → "the 2016 United States presidential election and" ✅
 * Remove wikilink on cancer ✅
 * "for Beautiful Trauma. The singer enlisted" → "for Beautiful Trauma, with the singer enlisting" ✅
 * "longtime collaborators such as" → "longtime collaborators, such as" ✅
 * "new project partners, including" → "new project partners like" ✅
 * "A total of fifty songs were composed" → "A total of 50 songs were composed" ✅
 * "development, one of them being" → "development, including" ✅
 * "the song was inspired by the" → "the song took inspiration from the" ✅
 * The target to Suffragette should be on "of the same name" instead ✅
 * "was co-written and co-produced by" → "was written and produced by" ✅
 * "Tobias Jesso Jr. at the Earthstar Creation Center," → "Tobias Jesso Jr., at the Earthstar Creation Center" ✅
 * "The song was recorded" → "The track was recorded" ✅
 * "while the singer was pregnant" → "while the former was pregnant" to not overuse "the singer" ✅
 * "She also described the track" → "Pink described the track" ✅
 * "done in my life" and credited Nina Simone" → "done in my life", and credited American singer Nina Simone" ✅
 * "co-wrote "I Am Here" in Los Angeles with Billy Mann and Christian Medice" → "co-wrote "I Am Here" with Billy Mann and Christian Medice in Los Angeles" ✅
 * "A year later, in July 2017, the singer contacted Mann" → "The following year, Pink contacted Mann in July" ✅
 * Target to Gospel music on "gospel" instead ✅
 * "The pair traveled to" → "The two of them traveled to" ✅
 * "and held a recording session" → "and booked a recording session" ✅
 * "Houser Audio with a thirty-piece choir" → "Houser Audio, with a 30 piece choir" ✅
 * "was co-written by Pink, Max Martin, and Shellback" → "was written by Pink, Max Martin, and Shellback" ✅
 * "him in which she confessed her love and admiration for him and asked" → "him, confessing her love and admiration for the rapper, and asking" ✅
 * "About Eminem, she commented" → "Speaking of Eminem, she commented" ✅

Title and artwork

 * Swap the order around since the artwork was revealed before she spoke about the title, and then retitle this section to Artwork and title ✅
 * "see the good side of it" → "see the world's good side" ✅
 * "natural disasters at every turn, [...] but" → "natural disasters at every turn". She continued, "but" ✅
 * "The record's artwork was unveiled along" → "The artwork for Beautiful Trauma was unveiled simultaneously" ✅
 * "Kurt Iswarienko, Pink is standing" → "Kurt Iswarienko, the cover art shows Pink standing" ✅
 * Target hoop earrings to Earring ✅

Overview

 * "Lyrically, the record has an" → "Lyrically, the album has an" ✅
 * "theme and addresses insecurities and imperfect relationships," → "theme, addressing insecurities and imperfect relationships," ✅
 * [10][37][38] should all be solely at the end of the sentence in this order ✅
 * "while Rolling Stone wrote that" → "while Rolling Stone staff wrote that" ✅
 * The info about pregnancy and vocal style changing is not backed up by the source ✅ Added the correct source
 * Target ballads to Sentimental ballad ✅

Song analysis

 * Retitle to Songs analysis since it is more than one ✅
 * Imgs need alt text ✅
 * "co-wrote and co-produced" → "both co-wrote and co-produced" ✅
 * Add ref(s) on the img main text to verify the information ✅
 * "titular track "Beautiful Trauma" is" → "titular track, "Beautiful Trauma", is" ✅
 * "song produced solely by" → "song that was produced solely by" ✅
 * Target piano chords to Chord (music) ✅
 * "troubled relationship compared to" → "troubled relationship and compare it to" ✅
 * [27][44] should both be solely at the end of the sentence ✅
 * "centered around subjects of" → "centered around the subjects of" ✅
 * "pop rock number" → "pop rock track that was" ✅
 * "inspired by Pink's difficulties faced in her relationship with her husband" → "inspired by the difficulties that Pink faced in her relationship with husband" since we obviously know that's her husband ✅
 * Drowned In Sound should be Drowned in Sound instead ✅
 * "between "Whatever You Want" and" → "between the track and" ✅
 * "The album's lead single" → "The lead single from Beautiful Trauma" with the wikilink ✅
 * "was co-written by Pink, Johnny McDaid," → "was written by Pink, McDaid," since you have already identified him by full name ✅
 * "was handled by the latter" → "was handled by the latter of the three" ✅
 * Sources do not say anything about four on the floor? → Source [42], the Billboard article, says "delivered over a dolorous 4/4 pulse" – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 17:52, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 * My bad, I didn't understand that initially sorry, I see it now. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:11, 8 June 2020 (UTC)


 * "Its political lyrics" → "The political lyrics" with the target fixed as suggested too ✅
 * "is a piano ballad deemed as an" → "is a piano ballad, deemed as an" ✅
 * "of growing up and longing for" → "of growing up while longing for" ✅
 * [35][36] should both be solely at the end of the sentence ✅
 * Wikilink guitar to itself ✅
 * Remove target on power ballad ✅
 * "music with elements of" → "music, with elements of" ✅
 * "was co-written by Pink and" → "was written by Pink and" ✅
 * Target Michael Busbee to busbee ✅
 * Target feminist to Feminism ✅
 * "chant" which depicts women" → "chant" that depicts women" ✅
 * [38][46][35] put in numerical order ✅

Live performances

 * "to promote the album's release" → "to promote the release of Beautiful Trauma" ✅
 * Remove wikilink on Germany ✅
 * "She was a headliner of the V Festival" → "During Pink's headline set at the V Festival that year" ✅
 * "she performed "What About Us"" → "she performed the song" ✅
 * "and sang "What About Us" as" → "and sang the song as" ✅
 * "at The Theater at" → "at The Theater of" ✅
 * Target Ace Hotel to Ace Hotel Los Angeles ✅
 * "premiering tracks from Beautiful Trauma to" → "premiering tracks from the album to" ✅
 * Remove wikilink on The Ellen DeGeneres Show ✅
 * "during the same day" → "that same day" ✅
 * "Pink performed on BBC Radio 1's Live Lounge "What About Us"," → "Pink performed the song for BBC Radio 1's Live Lounge," ✅
 * Put release years of the other songs in this sentence in brackets for each respective song
 * Target singles to Single (music) ✅
 * "her setlist included "What About Us"," → "the setlist included a performance of "What About Us"," to specify it was not cut from the ultimate setlist ✅
 * "On September 22, 2017, Pink" → "On September 22 of that year, Pink" ✅
 * Do not follow my advice for years in brackets in this sentence though, since there's too many songs to do it here
 * Img needs alt text ✅
 * Main text of the img needs a fullstop at the end ✅
 * "with the release of the album" → "with the release of Beautiful Trauma" ✅
 * "the singer partnered with" → "Pink partnered with" ✅
 * "a short documentary which included" → "a short documentary that includes" ✅
 * "interviewed and performed "What About Us" and "Beautiful Trauma" on Good Morning America" "interviewed on Good Morning America and also performed the two tracks" ✅
 * "Pink performed at" → "Pink performed during" ✅
 * "from the album" → "from Beautiful Trauma" ✅
 * "Pink appeared" → "Pink appeared on" ✅
 * "The singer also performed "Barbies"" → "The singer performed "Barbies"" ✅
 * "on November 8, 2017" → "on November 8 of that year" ✅
 * Wikilink string quartet to itself ✅
 * Wikilink Carpool Karaoke to itself ✅
 * "segment singing her previous singles, along with" → "segment, singing her previous singles as well as" ✅
 * Target JW Marriott Hotel to L.A. Live as this is the appropriate one in the Los Angeles context ✅
 * "for a highly choreographed performance" → "for a heavily choreographed performance" ✅
 * "was met with positive reception" → "was met with positive reviews from critics" ✅
 * "of the night, adding, "what" → "of the night, with the staff adding that "what" ✅
 * "by performing "What About Us" at" → "by performing "What About Us" for" ✅
 * Place target to The X Factor (British series 14) on "fourteenth series" text only ✅ I also corrected fourteenth series to 14th series – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 19:35, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Haha I should have spotted that, nice one! --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:11, 8 June 2020 (UTC)


 * After you have done this, target The X Factor UK to The X Factor (British TV series) ✅
 * Remove wikilink on France ✅
 * "at the Élysée Montmartre, in Paris, as" → "at the Élysée Montmartre in Paris as" ✅
 * "where she gave an interview" → "where she was interviewed" ✅
 * "the video for "Wild Hearts Can't Be Broken" finds" → "the accompanying music video sees" ✅
 * "in a barren room with a white tank top" → "in a barren room, wearing a white tank top" ✅
 * Wikilink USA Today to itself ✅
 * "called it "stunning"," → "called the visual "stunning"," ✅

Singles

 * "was released as the album's lead single" → "was released as the lead single from Beautiful Trauma" with the wikilink removed ✅
 * Target music critics to Music journalism ✅
 * "who praised its lyrical content and production" → "who praised the lyrical content and production" ✅
 * "topping the national charts of eight countries" → "topping the national charts of 8 countries" ✅
 * "within the top-ten in a dozen others" → "within the top 10 in 12 others" ✅
 * "In the United States, "What About Us" peaked at number thirteen" → "In the US, "What About Us" peaked at number 13" ✅
 * Platinum should not be capitalised and target platinum to RIAA certification ✅
 * "signifying sales of 1,000,000 copies" → "signifying sales of 1,000,000 certified units" ✅
 * Remove wikilink on music video ✅
 * "Georgia Hudson and choreographed" → "Georgia Hudson, and choreographed" ✅
 * "RJ Durell (known collectively as the GoldenBoyz), was" → "RJ Durell, known collectively as the GoldenBoyz, was" ✅
 * "and unheard people who unite" → "and unheard people uniting" ✅
 * "symbolizing harmony" → "symbolizing love" as that is backed up from ref(s) while harmony is not ✅
 * "was planned to be the second single from" → "had been slated for release as the second single from" ✅
 * [37] should solely be at the end of this sentence ✅
 * [95][96][97] ditto for all in their sentence ✅
 * "and was released to American" → "and was later released to US" ✅
 * "on November 21, 2017 as the second official single" → "on November 21 of that year as the second single" ✅
 * "portrays a married couple, Pink" → "portrays a married couple; Pink" ✅
 * "doing daily routines and dancing" → "going through daily routines, and dancing" ✅
 * "They open up to each other" → "The couple open up to each other" ✅
 * "performed moderately on the charts" → "performed moderately on record charts" ✅
 * "top forty positions in over ten countries" → "top 40 positions in over 10 countries" ✅
 * "and the United Kingdom" → "and the UK" ✅
 * Img needs alt text ✅
 * Main text of the img needs a fullstop at the end ✅
 * "clips from her performance at Super Bowl LII, and clips of her at the 2017 MTV Video Music Awards" → "clips from both her performance at Super Bowl LII and appearance at the 2017 MTV Video Music Awards" ✅
 * "from the Apple Music documentary" → "from On The Record: P!nk - Beautiful Trauma" since otherwise makes for confusion when reading ✅
 * "was sent to hot adult contemporary radio stations" → "was sent to US hot adult contemporary radio stations" with the appropriate wikilink since you can do that to redirects for sections/sub-sections ✅
 * "peaked at number eleven and twenty-two, respectively, on the" → "peaked at number 11 and 22 on the US" ✅
 * "charts from the United States" → "charts, respectively" ✅
 * Are you sure "selected territories" shouldn't be a bit more specific? – I added Europe since the song impacted several European airplay charts. Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 20:02, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "The music video that accompanied the song" → "The music video for the song" ✅
 * "Larn Poland and was shot" → "Larn Poland and shot" ✅
 * Put target to Northbridge, Western Australia only on Northbridge and wikilink Western Australia to itself ✅
 * ""Secrets" topped the Billboard Dance Club Songs ranking" → ""Secrets" topped the US Dance Club Songs chart" ✅
 * "to achieve this feat, following" → "to achieve this feat, following on from" ✅

Tour

 * "Pink announced on October 5, 2017, that she" → "Pink announced on October 5, 2017 that she" ✅
 * "a second North American leg" → "a second North American leg of the tour," ✅
 * "In July of the same year" → "In October of the same year" since that's what the ref backs up ✅
 * "was extended towards the next year" → "was extended towards 2019" ✅
 * "89 in Nord America" → "89 in North America" ✅
 * "27 in Europa, and one" → "27 in Europe, and 1" ✅
 * "many praising the setlist" → "with many critics praising the setlist" ✅
 * "the singer's vocals and aerial acrobatics" → "Pink's vocals as well as her aerial acrobatics" ✅
 * "the eleventh highest-grossing tour of all time and the second" → "the eleventh highest-grossing tour of all time, and the second" to specify difference ✅
 * "earning $397.3 million from over three million tickets" → "earning $397,300,000 from over 3,000,000 tickets" ✅

Critical reception

 * Up to 10 reviews are allowed in the Album ratings box; more can be added that are notable, especially The Independent and make sure that they are ordered alphabetically; The Guardian should be before Idolator, for example ✅ Added Drowned in Sound and PopMatters. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 20:58, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "received a generally mixed response from contemporary music critics" → "was met with generally mixed reviews from music critics" with no target ✅
 * Target average to Weighted arithmetic mean ✅
 * "Another music-aggregator AnyDecentMusic? gave Beautiful Trauma a score of 5.7 out of 10, based" → "Aggregator AnyDecentMusic? gave it 5.7 out of 10, based" ✅
 * Remove wikilink on USA Today ✅
 * "the stripped-back arrangements which emphasize" → "the "stripped-back arrangements" for emphasizing" ✅
 * "pointing out the singer's consistency" → "pointing out Pink's consistency" ✅
 * Remove the rating of Chuck Arnold from being in prose since it's cited in the ratings box ✅
 * "sound and compared the theme" → "sound, and compared the theme" ✅
 * "with Pink's previous album, The Truth About Love (2012)" → "with The Truth About Love" ✅
 * "Jamie Otsa of Drowned in Sound praised" → "Otsa praised" ✅
 * "and its wide array of influences" → "and wide array of influences" ✅
 * "Billboard's Andrew Unterberger believed" → "Unterberger believed" ✅
 * Remove The Independent rating from being written out in prose ✅
 * "Likewise, Josh Hurst of Slant Magazine found" → "Likewise, Hurst found" ✅
 * "Evan Sawdey of PopMatters was ambivalent toward the record's" → "Sawdey was ambivalent toward the album's" ✅
 * "gave the album a mixed review" → "gave the album a somewhat mixed review" ✅

Accolades

 * "ranked Beautiful Trauma at number 20" → "ranked the album at number 20" ✅
 * "listed the record as the thirtieth best album of 2017" → "listed the album as the 13th best of 2017" ✅
 * "has received nominations for" → "received nominations for" ✅
 * "the 61st Grammy Awards and" → "the 61st Grammy Awards, and" ✅
 * "Beautiful Trauma was nominated for the" → "the album was nominated for the" ✅

Commercial performance

 * "In the United States, the album debuted at number one on the" → "Beautiful Trauma debuted atop the US" ✅
 * "moving 408,000 album-equivalent units" → "with sales of 408,000 album-equivalent units," ✅
 * "and becoming her second consecutive number one album in the country" → "and becoming Pink's second consecutive number one album on the chart" ✅
 * "The album's sales were aided by her tour audience, the cost of the album" → "The sales were aided by her tour audience, with the cost of the album" ✅
 * "and the album being redeemable" → "and Beautiful Trauma being redeemable" ✅
 * Are you sure that the fact Swift surpassed this is notable? The term "acquired" is like stating "became" in the sense it doesn't imply that was the same forever. ✅ Removed the Swift filler information. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 08:02, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "Furthermore, the album had" → "Furthermore, the former had" ✅
 * "and also became her best" → "and also became Pink's best" ✅
 * Remove the stats that follow per WP:CHARTS up until the "After selling 628,000 copies..." point ✅
 * "in the country throughout 2017, Beautiful Trauma" → "in the US throughout 2017, Beautiful Trauma" ✅
 * "In the week ending May 17, 2018" → "For the week ending May 17, 2018" ✅
 * "vaulted from 83–2 on" → "rose 81 places from number 83 to number 2 on" ✅
 * "selling 135,000 copies and 139,000 album-equivalent units" → "with sales of 139,000 units, including 135,000 copies" ✅
 * "The album was certified" → "Beautiful Trauma was certified" ✅
 * "by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) for" → "by the RIAA for" ✅
 * "Beautiful Trauma opened at number-one with" → "it opened at number one, with" ✅
 * "opening week of the year at that time" → "opening week of 2017 at the time" ✅
 * "after The Truth About Love (2012)" → "after The Truth About Love" ✅
 * "the album topped the chart again" → "Beautiful Trauma topped the chart again" ✅
 * "an additional 16,000 album-equivalent units" → "an additional 16,000 units" ✅
 * "which denotes 160,000 units moved there" → "which denotes 160,000 units moved in that country" ✅
 * "In the United Kingdom, Beautiful Trauma debuted" → "Beautiful Trauma debuted" ✅
 * "UK Albums Chart with first-week sales" → "UK Albums Chart, with first-week sales" ✅
 * "became her second number-one album in the nation after" → "became her second number one album in the UK, after" ✅
 * "The record sold 372,000 copies" → "The former had sold 372,000 copies" ✅
 * "finishing as the nation's highest-selling album" → "finishing as the country's highest-selling album" ✅
 * "and has been certified platinum" → "and been certified platinum" ✅
 * Mention how many sales/units the BPI certification entails ✅
 * "the album reached the top of the charts" → "Beautiful Trauma reached the summit of the charts" ✅
 * "as well as the top-ten in other nations" → "as well as the top 10 in other countries" ✅
 * "In France, Beautiful Trauma debuted" → "In France, the album debuted" ✅
 * "highest-charting record" → "highest-charting album" ✅
 * "The album sales exceeded 100,000 units" → "The sales of Beautiful Trauma exceeded 100,000 units" ✅
 * "The record sold 50,000 copies" → "Beautiful Trauma sold 50,000 copies"# ✅
 * [156] should solely be at the end of the sentence with [157][158] ✅
 * "at the top of the ARIA Albums Chart with" → "at the top of the ARIA Albums Chart, with" ✅
 * "Its total sales in the country" → "The total sales in Australia" ✅
 * "where it remained at number-one" → "where the album remained at number one" ✅
 * "for more than one week after" → "for more than a week, after" ✅
 * "number-one album by a female artist" → "number one album by a female artist in the country" ✅
 * "finished as the second-highest" → "finished 2017 as the second-highest" ✅
 * [161][162] should solely be at the end of the sentence with [163] ✅
 * "In New Zealand, the record" → "In New Zealand, the album" ✅
 * "it was the third and eight" → "Beautiful Trauma was the third and eighth" ✅
 * "and had sold over three million units" → "and had sold over 3,000,000 units" ✅
 * Nice edition for the worldwide stats, but by when "had" it sold that type of amount? – Added "by March 2019" since that's when the IFPI numbers came out. Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 08:02, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Add "Credits adapted from liner notes" at the top of this section with the appropriate ref ✅
 * Is Shellback not credited under his real name?
 * No. Shellback is credited on both writing and production only with his nickname. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 11:37, 9 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Are you sure Mattman & Robin should be targeted for two members in a row under Writer(s)? ✅ Removed the latter target. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 11:37, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Remove wikilink on busbee under Producer(s) ✅

Personnel

 * Put (all tracks) after Pink's name ✅
 * Remove wikilinks/targets on any personnel listed after Performers and musicians that have already been wikilinked to earlier in this section ✅
 * What track(s) did Dave Kutch master? ✅ Added mastering for the whole album. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 11:51, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Would it be a good idea to reassembly the whole section and turn, for example, "piano (5, 7), bass (5, 7), guitar (5, 7), keyboards (5, 7)" into "piano, bass, guitar, keyboards (tracks 5, 7)"? – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 11:51, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Yeah that idea would work, but for personnel that only had a number of their roles for certain tracks, write "*Jack Antonoff – background vocals (1), drums, guitars, bass, synths (1, 10), piano (10)" for example --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:21, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Weekly charts

 * Good

Year-end charts

 * 2019 charts should be sortable like the other two ✅

Decade-end charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Certification Table Bottom template should be different since it needs to explain the double-dagger as well ✅
 * Are you sure Worldwide sales belongs here since there's no certification? If so, then add (IFPI) in brackets and why are two refs cited here?
 * There have to be two refs because one cites 2017 sales (1.8M) and the other 2018 sales (1.2M), bringing it to a total of 3M. – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 12:07, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Ah, now I understand you. --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:15, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Release history

 * Format → Format(s) ✅
 * Shouldn't this be for Various instead of the United States, since the album was a worldwide smash? ✅

Final comments and verdict

 * Since this is a large article as I said before, I will be doing it in stages somewhat, but you can respond to any changes as soon as they are requested. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:56, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
 * for a week until these issues are fixed, since I think that will be enough time. Man, that was a long article! --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:52, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi! Thank you very much for dedicating your time and energy into reviewing this big article. I think I covered every suggestion and issue. Please let me know if I missed something or if there's anything else I can do. Greets; – Gabrielflorin01 (talk) 17:41, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * So close, just respond to what I have said now and it should be fine. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:21, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅, good work in such short time! --Kyle Peake (talk) 05:55, 10 June 2020 (UTC)