Talk:Beauty and the Beast (1991 film)/GA4

GA Review 4
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Reviewer: XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 04:40, 12 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Prose
 * Awards and nominations
 * Combine the three paragraphs before the awards box into one paragraph.
 * Merchandise and spin-offs
 * Combine the two paragraphs into one.


 * Sourcing
 * Cast
 * ref#5 only contains detail on Belle, Beast, Maurice Gaston, and Lefou. The rest need to be supported with sources containing detail on them (don't use something like IMDb, though- there is longstanding consensus that it is not a reliable source for information)
 * Production
 * Music
 * Per WP:OVERCITE, ref#6 should only be used at the end of the third sentence in the first paragraph, just use ref#6 at end of the tenth sentence in the second paragraph, just use ref#13 at the end of the bit honoring Howard Ashman
 * Release and re-releases
 * More WP:OVERCITE, just use ref#31 at the end of the second paragraph
 * Reception
 * Critical response
 * More WP:OVERCITE, just use ref#53 at the end of David Whitley's review in the fourth paragraph
 * Awards and nominations
 * More WP:OVERCITE before the awards box, just use ref#64 once before the awards box
 * Merchandise and spin-offs
 * More WP:OVERCITE, just use ref#76 at the end of the second sentence of the first paragraph.
 * Musical adaptation
 * More WP:OVERCITE, just use ref#81 once at the end of the first paragraph, and just use ref#82 at the end of the third sentence and the last sentence of the second paragraph
 * Home media releases
 * More WP:OVERCITE, just use ref#8 once at the end of the first paragraph, just use ref#85 once at the end of the second paragraph, and just use ref#90 once at the end of the third paragraph
 * Video games
 * More WP:OVERCITE, just use ref#93 once at the end of the second paragraph, just use ref#98 once at the end of the fifth paragraph, and just use ref#100 once at the end of the sixth paragraph


 * Coverage
 * No problems here


 * Neutrality
 * No problems here


 * Stability
 * No problems here


 * GA Result
 * This is much better than when I first reviewed the article. After the above is addressed I will pass the GAN.


 * Ok, i think i fixed everything you mentioned. Koala15 (talk) 17:55, 12 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Just a few more things I noticed:
 * you don't need to link the characters in "Cast" section when they've already been linked in "Plot" section
 * there's WP:OVERCITE of ref#26 and ref#27 in the second paragraph of the "Early versions" subsection of "Production- just use ref#26 at the end of the third sentence of the second paragraph, and just use ref#27 at the end of the second paragraph
 * More WP:OVERCITE of ref#26 in the "Script rewrite and musicalization" subsection of "Production"- bring the first two sentences of the second paragraph to the end of the first paragraph and just use ref#26 after that sentence talking about moving work towards Ashman's home. Also remove ref#26 from the photo caption.
 * You will finally have GA after these are fixed up! XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 18:19, 12 April 2014 (UTC)


 * Done, but i removed the cast links from the plot section cause i think they are more appropriate for the cast section. Koala15 (talk) 18:32, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Now passing! Congratulations, it's finally payed off!! XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 18:41, 12 April 2014 (UTC)