Talk:Bedford, Western Australia/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:16, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:16, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Prosesize is only 15kb, so room for expansion if needed :)


 *  As of 2021, the local group continue to pursue native title rights over the suburban region, including Bedford - worth expanding if any extra information is available.
 * This statement was written by another editor, and to me, sounds vague. Yes, there is land being transferred to traditional owners in the south-west, but not in Bedford. Steelkamp (talk) 05:53, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 *  It was decided that the housing commission did need to built shops - "build"?
 * Fixed, thanks. Steelkamp (talk) 05:40, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 *  The expanding population also caused the Catholic Church to establish a primary school on Wood Street in Bedford. A Catholic church was already existent in the suburb, and so St Peter's Primary School was constructed next to the church. - can be streamlined into 2 or 1 sentence
 * Simplified into 1 sentence. Steelkamp (talk) 05:40, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 *  By the early 1970s, the development of Bedford was complete, the last road being Gummery Street in the suburb's north - ok this is the last street, but not sure that holds for development as a whole....?
 * Changed to "major development". Steelkamp (talk) 05:40, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Maybe the Name section should go further up the page...? Near establishment?
 * I've merged that section into other paragraphs. Steelkamp (talk) 05:53, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Nice work Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:15, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 *  The school moved down the street to a new site in 1942, that being its current site - why not just "The school moved down the street to its current site in 1942"
 * Done. Steelkamp (talk) 05:40, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Looks pretty comprehensive overall. A nice read. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:15, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

I have addressed each of your suggestions. Steelkamp (talk) 05:54, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

NB: earwigs copyvio is clear


 * If possible, add when the trams stopped running down Beaufort St.
 * Done. Steelkamp (talk) 04:19, 28 July 2021 (UTC)


 * I guess - anything on most expensive residence sold (just thinking about giving as big a nudge as possible to FA-hood) - if no source nevermind...
 * I’ll have a look later. Steelkamp (talk) 04:19, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * I've had a look, and couldn't find anything on this. Steelkamp (talk) 13:48, 28 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Nothing else newsworthy ever?
 * I’ll have a look later. Steelkamp (talk) 04:19, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * All I found was some news items on car crashes in Bedford, and this homicide from 2007 which I don't consider important enough to include in the article. Steelkamp (talk) 13:48, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for looking. Agree those items are not notable. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:59, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

1. Well written?:
 * Prose quality:
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2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
 * References to sources:
 * Citations to reliable sources, where required:
 * No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:
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4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
 * Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?
 * No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
 * Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: - great, well done. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:59, 28 July 2021 (UTC)