Talk:Beer in North Korea/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:28, 20 June 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  23:28, 20 June 2018 (UTC)


 * It should be noted that the top brand of beer is state-owned.
 * "The Taedonggang Brewing Company was allowed to buy the old brewery of Ushers of Trowbridge in the United Kingdom and import it to North Korea. The Taedonggang Beer Factory opened in April 2002 in the capital Pyongyang." Avoid using the same words to start each sentence.
 * NK news site should be marked needing subscription.
 * "beer festival in the country.[10][9]" Put refs in order.
 * Quotation marks needed for the quote.
 * If you mean the indented block quote ("[I]t is a country of microbreweries..."), then no. Blockquotes should not have quotation marks per MOS:BLOCKQUOTE. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 11:46, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ Disregard that point then, I must've forgotten that part of the MOS. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  17:01, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "On farmers' markets" In farmers' markets?
 * Quotation marks needed for the quote.
 * If you mean the indented block quote ("[I]t is a country of microbreweries..."), then no. Blockquotes should not have quotation marks per MOS:BLOCKQUOTE. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 11:46, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ Disregard that point then, I must've forgotten that part of the MOS. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  17:01, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "On farmers' markets" In farmers' markets?

Very interesting article. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  02:47, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking up the review, . I'll try to address concerns in a timely manner and answer any further inquiries you might have. I hope you'll enjoy the review process as much as I do. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 11:46, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * No problem, passing the article. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  17:01, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much, . – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 17:33, 23 June 2018 (UTC)