Talk:Behemoth (roller coaster)/GA1

GA Review
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Review


 * There are a lot of non-indept sources, but these are ok as they are uncontroversial things like policies, their own POV and maps etc
 * rpted "Canda's Wonderland"
 * ✅ Fixed.


 * "debut" not appropriate as the machine can't actively do things
 * ✅ Changed to "premiere"


 * Lead needs to be expanded to summarise body
 * ✅ Added additional content.


 * Use quote not the curly ones
 * ✅ Changed cquotes to quotes


 * You cannot stick external links in a prominent way in the main body. They can only be used as inline cites or at the bottom
 * ✅ Fixed.


 * "loose belongings - one designated for each of the three trains" use a spaced ndash or unspaced mdash here
 * ✅ Fixed.


 * Can it be explained what the Behemethon is?
 * ✅ Fixed.


 * Part of "Station" is not sourced
 * ✅ Removed unsourced material.


 * "The unofficial Wonderland fan club raves " raves is hyperbolic
 * ✅ Fixed.


 * howstuffworks? RS?
 * ✅ Removed.

 YellowMonkey  ( bananabucket ) (help the Invincibles Featured topic drive) 06:43, 6 November 2009 (UTC)