Talk:Beijing Workers' Autonomous Federation

Regarding tagged for neutrality, worldwide view, and copy-editing
The article focused on the the worker and the student. Perhaps more coverage can be assigned to the government response for a more complete picture? Copy edit tag refers to the tone and grammer ♠♠ BanëJ  ♠ ♠ 06:53, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree about the grammar and made revisions to the first half. Soulparadox 07:03, 20 March 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Soulparadox (talk • contribs)
 * I hope I don't come across as too arrogant in thinking I fixed all of those issues in my copy editing. I definitely toned down any POV statements I found (I actually chuckled when I saw the word "alas" used), and I think BanëJ is slightly misunderstanding the worldwide view tag. I agree more information on government response would be helpful to this article, but it's not really a worldwide view issue. I'm not sure you can really have that with an organization whose activities were confined to one country. --BDD (talk) 04:15, 8 May 2012 (UTC)