Talk:Beim Auszug in das Feld

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Hello, good article, I just kind of reviewed it a little, I am an amatuer at reviewing but here is my input -

Here is what I think could be improved (just slightly): maybe add one or two more sentences to the subheading 'Music' just for the look of an article...

Maybe throw in some more internal links to wikipedia articles... 'military march' might be good - or find a way of including an extra sentence in each subheading whereby you could contrive to have one blue link in each subsection?

Any chance more info could be included about this, like how when where this occured? qoute from article: "After Mozart's death, the work went missing and was restored to the awareness of scholars and musicians only early in the 20th century; further decades were needed before the work was printed in standard scholarly editions." I would like to know more about exactly how that happened after reading it.

You mention it uses dotted rythms - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dotted_note the wiki article might be a good link for someone that does not know what that is, and maybe a little sentance to describe it here?

Is there any chance a second source, even an internet source, could be included, so it is not mainly a single source article? I found several hits when i googled "'Beim Auszug in das Feld' pdf" - none about the song itself, but several mentioning it - any scholarly pdf title could be located fast like that, and perhaps if it had ANY useful info it could be referenced as a source, by title and internet link...

I could not find english lyrics but if they existed or a german english speaking wikipedia person could translate the german lyrics i found quickly, perhaps that could go in under lyrics?

all just ideas, nice article

Nathanielfirst 20:12, 8 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Thank you! When I get some time (soon) I'll work on implementing.  I do have some other reference sources...  Opus33 (talk) 04:08, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

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The disambiguator "(Mozart)" is not needed; the article should be moved to Beim Auszug in das Feld. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 01:56, 9 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Thank you, I've done this now. Also, thanks for fixing the entry at the KV article.  Opus33 (talk) 04:07, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

Draft translation in progress
Participation/critiques welcome. I like Beales's translation (cited in article) but it is meant to be metrical; an unrhythmic translation might be able to be a bit more literal. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Opus33 (talk • contribs) 12:30, 11 October 2017 (UTC)

I arranged the lyrics side-by-side for easier reading (following the music in blocks of 2 stanzas), and OCRed the text (so there might well be mistakes in it) of the remaining 16 stanzas from the NMA. I might come back to this to translate a bit more, or I might not – the song's sentiments don't translate well into the 21st century. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 13:42, 11 October 2017 (UTC)

Thank you! I'll try to keep going with this. Certainly I agree with you about the sentiments expressed. Opus33 (talk) 15:08, 11 October 2017 (UTC)