Talk:Belgian Shepherd/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: William Harris (talk · contribs) 21:32, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I shall commence the review. Discussion will take place below the following assessment table. William Harris (talk) 21:32, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Assessment

Discussion
"Whilst" is formal British English, however you might consider changing this to the more widely used "While". Either way, one of our North American cousins is going to change it soon. William Harris (talk) 06:32, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
 * I will make the change, they’re not a British breed so the language should be neutral. Cavalryman (talk) 09:23, 24 October 2020 (UTC).

Regarding the text "A minority of kennel clubs, most notably the American Kennel Club, recognise the four varieties as separate breeds". Is this only the AKC, or are there others which have not been specified in the reference? William Harris (talk) 08:28, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Have just confirmed, that source only mentions the AKC, so I will amend the sentence. Cavalryman (talk) 09:23, 24 October 2020 (UTC).
 * Please amend the lede as well, as this is a fact - only one KC recognises 4 separate breeds. William Harris (talk) 10:01, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Apologies, done. Cavalryman (talk) 10:15, 24 October 2020 (UTC).