Talk:Belgium at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 22:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  22:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)


 * "into the Vancouver Olympics," Replace comma with colon.
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 14:49, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * "This was Belgium's first time fielding women in bobsleigh competition." The two women's names should be mentioned here.
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 14:51, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * "54.09 seconds," Remove comma.
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 14:51, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Mollin is misspelled several times.
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Watch out for Van den Bogaert's first name and capitalization.
 * Fixed. Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * There should be something about Mollin's second run.
 * When you record a DNF on run 1, you don't get to make run 2. Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Try not repeating the same words for the beginning of each sentence. For example, "Both".
 * Done Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Mention something van der Perren's history in the Olympics.
 * Nice catch, done.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Belgian Olympic and Interfederal Committee" Link in prose needed.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "in selecting her for the Games. These were her first Olympic Games" Merge to "in selecting her for her first Olympic games."
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Which spelling are you going with here, American or British (meter/metre)?
 * Meter, the only metres I see are in the citations, which they should be since they are the titles of the articles  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * You should try not starting each paragraph with "Gysel".
 * Changed one to He  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Overlinking to Celski's article.
 * And it's "J.R. Celski".
 * Righto, fixed both.  Kees08  (Talk)  

Mostly minor things. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  04:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)