Talk:Belize at the 2004 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

I will review this one shortly. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 15:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "The delegation consisted of two track and field athletes, Michael Aguilar and Emma Wade;" - colon instead of comma. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Background
 * "This made Athens their ninth appearance at a Summer Olympic Games, and they have yet to appear at any Winter Olympic Games." - "although" would be better than "and"
 * "Belize sent two track and field athletes to Athens, Michael Aguilar and Emma Wade." - colon instead of comma. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Athletes
 * "...time of the Athens Olympics, and had previously represented..." - no need for the comma.
 * "...heats of the women's 200 meters, and was drawn into heat five." - no need for the comma.
 * "Michael Aguilar was 24 years old at the time of these Olympics, and was making his only Olympic appearance." - no need for the comma.~
 * "He was drawn into heat three, and finished the heat in 51.21 seconds, finishing seventh and last in his heat, and he was eliminated." - recommend splitting into two sentences.


 * Images
 * Only photo is a country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)


 * References
 * Are you going to archive the refs?
 * All other refs look good. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * Looks pretty good, will place on hold. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks, for another review.  Everything has been addressed, and the refs have been archived. Courcelles (talk) 20:58, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Awesome, looks good. i fixed a small typo fyi. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 22:30, 3 December 2018 (UTC)