Talk:BellTel Lofts/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 1TWO3Writer (talk · contribs) 14:32, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Part of August 2023 backlog.

Spot-check

 * [11], [49], [55] clippings seems to have text cut off. I imagine the process is tedious, but I'd go through all the Newspaper.com clippings and check if all text is present for verifiability.
 * I have fixed some clips and will look at the rest of these later. However, in my view, these clippings are convenience links, rather than absolutely necessary to verify the reference (someone could in theory go to a library and look at these articles in person). Epicgenius (talk) 00:35, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * [69] there doesn't seem to be any mention of 7 MetroTech in the article or about it being unrelated, although I can't read so just double check.
 * It is mentioned, but "Seven" is spelled out. The source says Other projects named "Metrotech" have come along independent of Forest City: Five Metrotech Center is the name given to a new library for the university. Six Metrotech Center is a New York Telephone Company learning center. Seven Metrotech Center is another phone company building. The way I read it, 5, 6, and 7 MetroTech were not related to the broader MetroTech project (which is the Forest City project). Epicgenius (talk) 00:35, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Got it. Sorry about that. 123Writer talk 01:18, 25 August 2023 (UTC)


 * I suppose so, I guess you should fix it only if a whole sentence is missing, but cleaner clippings is always nice! 123Writer talk 01:20, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Discussion

 * Thanks for the review @1TWO3Writer. I've responded to your above comments and will look at the clippings soon. – Epicgenius (talk) 00:36, 25 August 2023 (UTC)