Talk:Belle (Disney song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 10:05, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi, this song brings back memories, so I'll review it. FunkMonk (talk) 10:05, 25 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking the time to review.--Changedforbetter (talk) 11:38, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Last paragraph under writing needs a source.
 * Alright. I'll just cite the film.--Changedforbetter (talk) 11:38, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * "the film's narcissistic villain whose goal it is to marry her." "it" seems redundant.
 * Removed!--Changedforbetter (talk) 11:38, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * More to come as I read along.
 * "very "distant from contemporary pop", Ashman and Menken were initially very skeptical" Could one "very" be taken out?
 * Done. Second "very" removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:46, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * "provided the voice of its titular character," Easter egg links should not be used, could you add the name?
 * Simply unlinked.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:46, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * "lost to the film's title and theme song" Easter egg link redundant here, since title of the other song was linked just before.
 * Solved. Linked to only theme song.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:46, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Nice, I think it is ready to pass! One last thing, I don't think the Belle character is linked in the article outside the lead, could this be done (no easter egg)? I'll pass after your next reply. FunkMonk (talk) 21:30, 25 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Easily solved. Now linked in the Writing section.--Changedforbetter (talk) 22:15, 25 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Passed then! FunkMonk (talk) 22:26, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * One last thing, could the quote under Critical reviews be moved to the right, so it doesn't clash with the title below? FunkMonk (talk) 20:20, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Sure. No problem.--Changedforbetter (talk) 01:03, 11 October 2013 (UTC)