Talk:Bellerby

Improvements needed.
There is a lot of good work in the article, but it could be better if set out as per WikiProject UK geography/How to write about settlements. The lead paragraph contains wording that reads like advertising, contains links to facebook and twitter pages and may be challenged. If the person who wrote it wants to have such wording, they would be better to place it in the relevant village article on Wikivoyage. As the majority of recent editing has been done by one (possibly local resident?) they may wish to take this suggestion up on improvement. I have left a similar message on their user talk page. Rimmer1993 (talk) 13:16, 4 April 2013 (UTC)

User:Rimmer1993 (talk) Rimmer1993 Thank you for your comments, I have reviewed my article and made the relevant changes in order to avoid language which suggests advertisment. I have also taken into accounts minor edits done by assumed local residents of the area.