Talk:Ben's Chili Bowl/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 01:53, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

Hello! I will be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review should be posted shortly. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 01:53, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
 * I've decided to list this article as a GA, and leave the below as suggestions for further improvement. Good job! Nikkimaria (talk) 13:57, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

Writing and formatting

 * "while police used conducted surveillance" - grammar
 * How/why did cakes and pies attract addicts?
 * "many of Ben's sausages" - does this refer to sausages that Ben made, or ones that he developed a recipe for, or generic sausages for the restaurant?

Accuracy and verifiability

 * "the sign was later altered to state "but he paid"" - source? Also, was it altered by the Ali family or anonymously?
 * Keep format the same between References and Further reading
 * Use a consistent formatting for references. For example, "James Beard Foundation" or "The James Beard Foundation"?
 * Ref 2: page(s)?
 * Use pp only for multiple pages
 * Refs 4, 6, 20: retrieval date?
 * Ref 14: publisher?

Broad
No issues noted

Neutrality

 * If anything, a bit pro-Ben's. No major concerns, though

Stability
No problems

Images

 * Make sure captions are neutrally worded and/or sourced
 * Source link for the Bush image is dead

Thanks for the review. I've fixed some of the issues and will gradually fix others that are a little difficult. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:05, 16 October 2010 (UTC)