Talk:Ben Affleck/GA1

GA Review
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 * "Benjamin Géza Affleck-Boldt;[1] August" &rarr; "Benjamin Géza Affleck-Boldt[1] on August"
 * Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:42, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
 * References should be formatted according to WP:CITE/ES; I suggest using cite web. Unformatted references include 2 and 3.
 * Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:42, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
 * "Noble events" actually only discusses about one event; it can be merged into "Personal life"
 * Done.
 * The lead has three, fairly short paragraphs. Either expand the third one or cut it down to two paragraphs, since the article as a whole is not long enough that it necessarily requires three lead paragraphs.
 * Have been combined. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:49, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
 * "He quit smoking" paragraph can probably be merged with the previous paragraph about his tattoos, as they are somewhat related and both paragraphs are extremely short.
 * Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:49, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
 * "During the final" can also be merged with the previous paragraph as they are related and the previous paragraph is really short
 * Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:51, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

Gary King ( talk ) 20:11, 26 June 2008 (UTC)