Talk:Ben Linus/GA1

GA Review
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Okay I think I've fixed all of that except for a couple of things. I could reword the stuff about when Alex was captured, she was captured 16 years before the crash, 1988, and the purge was in 1992 because Horace said 12 years ago in Cabin Fever I think. The other thing is I don't really understand what you mean by mentioning the sonic barrier when meeting Richard for the first time, could you explain that further please? Sanders11 (talk) 22:01, 29 November 2008 (UTC)


 * What I mean is that Ben wasn't planning on meeting Richard when he crossed the barrier, and when you say that he encountered Richard it sounds like he already knew what was going to happen. Do you get it (I'm always a bit vague). Also, could you move the image of Ben arriving on the island to the right per MOS:IMAGE. Furthermore, the article looks good, good work.-- Music 26/  11  11:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)


 * I've reworded it a bit, is that any better? Sanders11 (talk) 12:19, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Yep, it's more clear now, GA pass.-- Music 26/  11  12:57, 30 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Thank you! Sanders11 (talk) 15:22, 30 November 2008 (UTC)