Talk:Ben May (footballer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: EchetusXe 16:22, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Following my copy-edit I feel there are no further issues to be dealt with the article in terms of obtaining GA status. Congratulations!--EchetusXe 16:58, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Following my copy-edit I feel there are no further issues to be dealt with the article in terms of obtaining GA status. Congratulations!--EchetusXe 16:58, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Following my copy-edit I feel there are no further issues to be dealt with the article in terms of obtaining GA status. Congratulations!--EchetusXe 16:58, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Minor issues I have corrected myself
 * Quotations should always be put into context, as in my addition that 'the club's website reported that "..."'. Not really necessary with short extracts like "bundling home Brentford's third".
 * "before he was loaned out to Colchester United until the end of the season on 27 March 2003" - could mislead some users into thinking that the season ended on 27 March 2003.