Talk:Bencoolen MRT station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:56, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it for now, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:58, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "of 43m" use the convert template.
 * "kilometre (13 mi) Downtown Line Stage 3, consisting" add the (DTL3) abbreviation here and then use it consistently rather than further down the article.
 * "at a sum of S$177.58 million in " could you convert to US$ and keep the decimal places down.
 * "the CCL and NSL and" put the full titles here and abbreviate rather than lower down in the article.
 * " deep depth of 43" deep depth?! Just remove deep.
 * "the live tunnels" what's a "live tunnel"?
 * "at strategic places" what does that mean?
 * "As there is limited"" is or was?
 * "cyclist-friendly" not quite encyclopedic tone.
 * "The water was immediately drained" is this even relevant? It seems highly trivial in the scheme of things.
 * "other Downtown Line 3 (DTL 3) stations" see above, this abbreviation should have happened way back.
 * "between the Fort Canning and" overlink.
 * "headways" link.
 * "is currently the" see WP:CURRENTLY.
 * "existing infrastructures at the" infrastructure.
 * "only 22-metre (72 ft) wide" 22 metres (i.e. don't use )
 * "140-metre (460 ft) long" same.
 * "frame retro-design to harmonise with the" sounds like a brochure.
 * "Exit A of the station integrated with the NAFA campus." and "The interior of the station with curved walls in earth-tone colours." no full stops.
 * "that resembles canyon walls," same. This is POV.  They may be intended to resemble canyon walls.  Probably a good idea to get this copyedited by someone else.
 * "dedicated bus lane[25] to " move that ref to the end of the sentence.
 * "two massive murals" how big?
 * "figures subtly directs commuters" again, this is POV/brochure speak. Needs copyediting.
 * Spaced hyphens in the refs need spaced en-dashes.
 * Earwig is showing slightly concerning overlap...

Resolved issues with help of ce from --ZKang123 (talk) 00:22, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok, a couple of small tweaks from me but happy to promote now.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 08:55, 22 March 2021 (UTC)