Talk:Benevolent Empire

Review for possible delation
I was going to edit this article however it needs a lot of work. This is as POV was an article can get.savasas (talk) 22:12, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

I agree, this article is very slanted. I'm here to work on the wikify tag, but I'm going to attempt to edit for neutrality. I think a page on this subject should exist, but this one needs a lot of help. Nihola (talk) 02:19, 5 February 2011 (UTC)


 * I rewrote the intro for clarity and neutral tone, added a photo, and a 'see also' section. I tried to edit the body of the text, but we need someone with more knowledge here.  I added a couple new sections, to clarify, and took out some really slanted sentences, but the content needs to be rewritten and more factual information provided.  As is, the facts would take up maybe one paragraph.  I put a note on a couple other related talk pages, in the hope someone will take up the call.  Perhaps the small amount of real info here could indeed be merged into a page like Second Great Awakening. Nihola (talk) 05:18, 5 February 2011 (UTC)

When was term coined?
Might be useful to include when the term was coined. Did it come from one of the movement's participants or was it created by historians? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 107.5.76.133 (talk) 17:12, 11 November 2010 (UTC)

Please see 'Charles Finney' for more info regarding Benevolent Empire. He is acknowledged as one of the founding members. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.52.207.101 (talk) 14:28, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

removing POV tag with no active discussion per Template:POV
I've removed an old neutrality tag from this page that appears to have no active discussion per the instructions at Template:POV:
 * This template is not meant to be a permanent resident on any article. Remove this template whenever:
 * There is consensus on the talkpage or the NPOV Noticeboard that the issue has been resolved
 * It is not clear what the neutrality issue is, and no satisfactory explanation has been given
 * In the absence of any discussion, or if the discussion has become dormant.

Since there's no evidence of ongoing discussion, I'm removing the tag for now. If discussion is continuing and I've failed to see it, however, please feel free to restore the template and continue to address the issues. Thanks to everybody working on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:34, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

Article rewrite
The majority of this article lacked inline citations. For this reason, I removed a large amount of material and drastically reduced the size of the article with this edit. While shorter, the article is now completely sourced. Ltwin (talk) 08:05, 5 April 2020 (UTC)