Talk:Benjamin Cheever

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add more please. change the picture smaller. I don't know how to do this.

Class project
Hi, I will be editing and adding new things to this page as a class project on American Editors at Towson University.

Jola066 (talk) 15:56, 28 March 2011 (UTC)

I started adding more to the page today. Jola066 (talk) 21:33, 12 April 2011 (UTC) I added even more Jola066 (talk) 18:35, 22 April 2011 (UTC) More information to follow Jola066 (talk) 16:03, 23 April 2011 (UTC) Putting finishing touches on the page Jola066 (talk) 16:14, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

Hi Jolanta, I just want to say that your editor page is well-done! I did notice some punctuation/grammer errors in "The Good Nanny" synopsis. There was also no list of your citations/footnotes. Although your footnotes allows the reader to link to a reference, providing a list might be good. You might want to ask Dr. Portolano about that. Another thing, Under his "Personal Life," you might want to reword the sentence structure a little bit. I will be checking on your page for the next couple of weeks to offer ideas when needed. After May 10, (also if needed), I will be happy to help edit. Keep up the good work and Bravo!Mommyamma (talk) 08:55, 3 May 2011 (UTC) Mommyamma (talk) 09:06, 3 May 2011 (UTC)