Talk:Benjamin Freakley/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 20:57, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Can the lead be expanded a bit to cover the article per MOS:LEAD? And could you change "After Freakley's first invasion of Iraq" to something that makes him sound less like Rambo?
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * I have modified the concerned text with this edit, is this better?--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 00:28, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * That's fine. Now, if you can just expand the lead, and I can pass the article. Cheers! Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:32, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * How about this, I have added two sentences to the lead, and sectionalized the biography.--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 18:11, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Passing now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:04, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * I have modified the concerned text with this edit, is this better?--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 00:28, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * That's fine. Now, if you can just expand the lead, and I can pass the article. Cheers! Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:32, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * How about this, I have added two sentences to the lead, and sectionalized the biography.--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 18:11, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Passing now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:04, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * That's fine. Now, if you can just expand the lead, and I can pass the article. Cheers! Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:32, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * How about this, I have added two sentences to the lead, and sectionalized the biography.--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 18:11, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Passing now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:04, 4 April 2013 (UTC)