Talk:Benjamin Schulte/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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General

 * All mentions of events such as 50 m and 100 m, 400 m would be better off spelt out as 50 meters for example
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Lead

 * "He competed at the 2012 Summer Olympics in the Men's 10 kilometre Open Water event," - link Men's 10 kilometre Open Water to Swimming at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's marathon 10 kilometre and do the same for when it is mentioned in the main body
 * "where he placed 25th out of 25." - where he placed last of all participants.

Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Early life and education

 * "Benjamin Schulte was born December 22, 1995, in Tamuning, Guam." - reword to Benjamin Schulte was born in the Guam city of Tamuning on December 22, 1995.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "He attended Miami State High School, located in Gold Coast, Australia." - He attended Miami State High School in Queensland's Gold Coast.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Olympic career

 * "Schulte decided to refocus and switch from long distance swimming to short distance. " - link long distance swimming
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Schulte broke his own national record during the" - wikilink national record to List of Guamanian records in swimming
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * The wikilink for the 2016 Summer Olympics should be at the start of the first sentence of the third paragraph and not at the end of it
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

International career

 * "with a time of 29.26 to win the gold medal." - 29.26 seconds
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Overall a neater piece of work than the other two articles I've reviewed. Just the quibbles above will need addressing. MWright96 (talk) 12:04, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Done with the comments, let me know if you have more. Thanks!  Kees08  (Talk)   06:52, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Very well then. There's nothing more that is needed to be changed here. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:58, 19 April 2018 (UTC)