Talk:Benny's Video

So far, this article is in the midst of development. The analysis is original work, as is the plot summary. Tgkohn 22:59, 30 January 2007 (UTC)

As of today, the writing is complete. Let the revision begin! Tgkohn 22:20, 1 February 2007 (UTC)

Plot Section
The plot section makes no sense and appears to be incomplete. The first paragraph is barely readable and the second paragraph starts randomly mentioning a dead body which had not been described earlier. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 207.161.215.147 (talk) 01:59, 14 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Because of the nonsensical plot, I reverted the page to a lengthy (but sensible) version. Feel free to shorten it, but let's not make it impossible to understand.73.135.55.13 (talk) 22:52, 10 July 2016 (UTC)

Analysis
I removed the analysis section as it came off to me as a personal essay. If there is to be such a section, it should be sourced by reviews or published essays.--CyberGhostface (talk) 03:44, 29 January 2009 (UTC)