Talk:Berkeley Faculty Club

Events
I know you are having fun with this with the focus on so-called paranormal activity, but the reality is that the club is more known or popular for hosting events like weddings, receptions, and special events, but you don’t say anything about it in the article. You might want to review the website. Viriditas (talk) 18:49, 22 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Added refs for events -Bogger (talk) 21:35, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Good work, but I think you should use the meeting venue section for this material as well and maybe consider changing the section to just "Facilities". IMO, meetings, special events, weddings, and receptions should all be lumped into one section.  There's also the guest rooms, which I think are categorized as a "hotel". Viriditas (talk) 21:41, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Moved stuff around. Could you have a look at the DYK nomination..? It needs final approval -Bogger (talk) 07:06, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
 * . Happy to do so in about nine to ten hours from now if someone hasn’t got to it first. I’m offline until then. Viriditas (talk) 09:57, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

I'm looking through the article right now. I made a quick copyedit, but I couldn't help but notice that given the wealth of content available for this article (A History of the Faculty Club at Berkeley‎, 1990, ; The Faculty Club, 1995, ISBN 978-1-85490-433-1, and the current NRHP summary of the history in the article which is barely being used) the article is still quite small (3250 characters at the moment) since it was first submitted more than a month ago. I'm honestly disappointed that it hasn't been expanded at all since that time. I think right now, it would take you like 10 minutes just to highlight the main points found in this report. I think that would be a good way forward. It's undue to give such tremendous weight to so-called paranormal activity (a bit of a joke, really) when there's so much history at work here and barely any of it in the article. I'm sorry if you think I'm being tough and uncompromising, but there is a basic level of presentation and completeness that we should strive to achieve, no matter the size of the article. So, please, take a quick moment to glean the NRHP link above and see if you can briefly summarize the most important points. I would find that greatly encouraging and it would spur me to submit a review. Viriditas (talk) 20:56, 23 October 2023 (UTC)