Talk:Bermuda at the 2018 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:04, 21 July 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  06:04, 21 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Courcelles (talk) 14:12, 21 July 2018 (UTC)


 * "This was the nation's eighth appearance in the Winter Olympics." Bermuda is not a nation.
 * "cross-country skier Tucker Murphy. He finished his only event in 104th place." Merge to "cross-country skier Tucker Murphy, who finished his only event in 104th place."
 * made their Winter Olympic Games debut in 1992 at the Albertville Games; and have appeared in every Olympics since their respective debuts bar one" Replace semicolon with comma.
 * "THe delegation also consisted of Murphy's coach, Pepa Miloucheva; his waxer Jeff Shaw; the chef de mission Lawrence Murphy; and Sean Field-Lament, who represented the Bermuda Olympic Association's executive board." Use commas instead of semicolon and fix the first word.
 * ", and for the closing ceremony." No need for comma.
 * Remove third link to Tucker Murphy in prose, unnecessary for an article this short.
 * "Murphy made his third straight appearance at the Winter Olympics. He was 36 years old at the time of these Olympics." Merge the two sentences.
 * "He finished the men's 15 km freestyle in a time of 43 minutes and 5 seconds, which was good for 104th place. He was more than nine minutes behind the gold medallist, Dario Cologna of Switzerland." Same here.

A few things. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  23:32, 21 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review,, everything has been taken care of! Courcelles (talk) 23:52, 21 July 2018 (UTC)