Talk:Bernard Gui/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 06:51, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

Will try to provide the review during the next days! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 06:51, 9 March 2019 (UTC)


 * events - in total – minor quibble, but you could replace the hyphen with the correct dash (–), see WP:DASH.
 * Done! Etiennedebourbon (talk) 15:27, 10 March 2019 (UTC)


 * uncompleted at the time of his death in 1291. – I would specify with "the latters" instead of "his", as otherwise it is not clear who this is referring to.
 * Also done, on re-reading that was a little unclear. Etiennedebourbon (talk) 15:27, 10 March 2019 (UTC)


 * uncoverted – should this be "unconverted"?
 * Yes it should, changed! Etiennedebourbon (talk) 15:27, 10 March 2019 (UTC)


 * That's it; very good quality overall. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 08:08, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much for your very kind (and very prompt!) review. I have made all of the recommended changes. Etiennedebourbon (talk) 15:27, 10 March 2019 (UTC)
 * You are welcome! The article is promoted now, congratulations! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:07, 10 March 2019 (UTC)