Talk:Bernard Schriever/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:18, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:18, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Images properly licensed
 * External links OK and no DABs
 * He remained behind as chief of the maintenance and engineering division of the Fifth Air Force Service Command until the end of the war. Remained behind?
 * ✅ Changed to "remained in Australia".  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
 * After the war, Schriever returned joined the United States Army Air Forces An extra word here?
 * ✅ Deleted "returned"  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
 * USAF standardized the flying boom "on" the flying boom
 * ✅ Corrected.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
 * The US military uses dmy date format
 * ✅ Converted.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  02:54, 10 September 2019 (UTC)
 * 3,000 pounds (1,400 kg) nuclear warhead with use the adjectival form for the weight and "within"
 * ✅Done.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
 * White reorganized then typo?
 * ✅ Corrected.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:16, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you. It wasn't intended as a major overhaul, but the original version was very poor, and largely unsourced.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Understood. I'd recommend that the date format be fixed before any ACR though.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:31, 8 September 2019 (UTC)