Talk:Bert Van Bork

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Peer Review
Good start! You have plenty of personal info on him but I would love to see more about his professional life and achievements. You mentioned he won a few awards, what were they? Did he collaborate with anyone? Since he is also a visual artist some images would be cool but I'm not sure how easy they are to find. JEHNEDO (talk) 08:16, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Great Work!
Dear Editor,

It is now a great source to know about the artist. However, I have three minor suggestions: 1. While in Chicago Van Bork started filming and producing instructional videos. while also working to create a collective to preserve pieces of art that were created in concentration camps. I think that this sentence is unfinished.

2. After his early career, what's next?

3. It is a long list of films, but did Bert Van Bork make all of them?

Thank you!

Best, bqi77 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bqi77 (talk • contribs) 02:09, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Review
This is a good start, but needs further development. Consider turning to additional resources to round out your article, including books and earlier articles on Van Bork. Other sources include the Academic Film Archive of America, which has an extensive section on Van Bork, including filmography, and books by Geoff Alexander. Include sections on his painting and photography, and the collections in which they reside. Additionally, rather than listing all of Van Bork's films on the Wikipedia page, you might consider a section called "Additional Sources" and link directly to the website of Van Bork's estate and the Academic Film Archive of America.AmyDeer (talk) 21:00, 6 March 2018 (UTC) Note that Bert Van Bork died in 2014. AmyDeer (talk) 04:03, 7 March 2018 (UTC)