Talk:Besarion Jughashvili/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 07:57, 22 December 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing now:
 * Montefiore writes – it would be good to introduce these and other authors with one word, e.g., "Historian Montefiore". Helps the reader.
 * I have noted who Monntefiore is in the "Family background and early life section" ("...with historian Simon Sebag Montefiore suggesting..."). Would that not be sufficient here?


 * the Georgian custom to partially pay for business with wine – I don't understand this, so not sure if it could be formulated more clearly?
 * Re-worded, hope that is better.


 * in January, 1900 Ioseb was arrested for the first time, on account of Jughashvili. When Jughashvili left Didi Lilo he was not removed from the village roles, so still owed taxes as a peasant from the region. – so he was arrested because his father owed taxes and a peasant from the region? Would it be possible to add why this was a crime?
 * Unfortunately there isn't any clarification in any of the sources regarding this, except that he was arrested.


 * everything else looks very good. Did a slight copy edit. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 07:57, 22 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay, been away for a few days. Addressed things here, let me know what you think. Kaiser matias (talk) 23:04, 24 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Great, thank you very much. Passing now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 08:21, 25 December 2018 (UTC)