Talk:Bessas (magister militum)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 05:10, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

I'll get to this this weekend.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:10, 15 September 2012 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * This is awkward: active especially under Justinian I Perhaps, "primarily active under Justinian I"? Who are Gadar and Yazdegerd? Are they notable? This is also awkward: Nothing more is heard of him Perhaps "Nothing more is known about him"?
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Hello Sturmvogel and thanks for the review! I've implemented the suggested changes. Cheers, Constantine  ✍  09:59, 20 September 2012 (UTC)