Talk:Bessie Brown Mention

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Left my peer review!

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 January 2021 and 26 April 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Calenjanesky, Danifuchs. Peer reviewers: Chloe McKeown, Julsy2002, Sophiamrod, Belleevans, Samanthadownes.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

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Hi and  -- I think this looks so good and I'm so excited! Just a few notes. Be sure to proof for typos, and in the second sentence in the second section move the citation to the end of that sentence. Also make sure you create a lead section. It doesn't need to be long or fancy, and can repeat info found in the rest of the article. It's like a mini abstract for the article. Definitely look into hyperlinking to places and orgs as possible (and linking back to her ultimately). In the "participation in politics section" cut "discussed above" as that's not the kind of rhetoric needed/customary in encyclopedic entries. Otherwise, super, and I still have to connect with wiki for image questions. Concerning the other Peer Reviews: Overall, proud of this work! --Liliput000 (talk) 12:02, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Re Belle's peer review -- I know this info may not be available, so don't worry if you don't have it.
 * I agree with Julia about the lead
 * I agree with Chloe about hyperlinking