Talk:Best Sex I've Ever Had/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:49, 19 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:19, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "that the couple were no longer together" mildly confusing as to which couple this is referring.
 * "the New York Daily News were " overlinked.
 * " by Liz Smith that" likewise.
 * "bitches...I " non-breaking space before the ellipsis and a regular space after the ellipsis.
 * Apply to other ellipses in the article.
 * ""...before" but in this case, it's a non-breaking space after the ellipsis!
 * Could link column inch.
 * New York Times is The New York Times.
 * "the New York Post reporter" previously you abbreviated this to Post. Be consistent.
 * "accompany the headline" (or close variants) appears three times in three sentences, bit repetitive.
 * "ABC, CBS, NBC, Fox and CNN " you linked all the newspapers, I imagine it's not unreasonable to link all these broadcasters.
 * "headline, Maples" odd punctuation, maybe a colon/semi-colon, but not a comma.
 * I've incorporated all of your suggested improvements. Many thanks! No Swan So Fine (talk) 22:09, 20 September 2021 (UTC)