Talk:Bestwood Welfare Black Diamonds Brass Band

Though the band seems somewhat notable, the tone needs some reworking. At present, the page reads more like a biography of the band rather than an encyclopedic entry. It reads like a story, and needs to be more NPOV. Some citations and references to third-party sources would be useful. --V2Blast (talk) 23:14, 5 August 2008 (UTC)