Talk:Beto O'Byrne

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Great start! I like the flow of your article a lot- it sounds like a real Wikipedia article. Suggestions: Check the second sentence of your "Achievements" paragraph- I think there is a typo in word order/repetition. In the next sentence after that, you say "He has also participated in playwright festivals. including...", but I think you meant a comma after festivals. If you can add a final sentence to the Achievements section, just as a closing sentence to that paragraph, that would help. Finally, you have two spaces between "Don't" and "go" in "Don't go to dinner". Galantlex (talk) 18:08, 19 April 2017 (UTC)