Talk:Better Call Saul season 2/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 03:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Review forthcoming. Heartfox (talk) 03:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * (Rhea Seehorn), is comma unnecessary
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Jonathan Banks also reprises his role as Mike Ehrmantraut, who is engaged in a feud with the Mexican drug cartel after a staged altercation with Tuco Salamanca (Raymond Cruz), which was paid for by Nacho Varga (Michael Mando), lands Tuco in prison and draws Hector's (Mark Margolis) attention to Mike. I'm kind of confused; could this be split into 2 sentences/less commas?
 * ✅ The Optimistic One (talk) 13:02, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * critics, and comma unnecessary
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * season 1, season 2 I think these numbers should be spelled out
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * ref 1 needs archiving/fix broken link
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 18:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * I guess you can keep them as is but I would personally italicize Vulture, Fansided, etc. (unless it was like amc.com or something which doesn't make sense to be)
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * All of the main cast returned for this season. Bob Odenkirk returns as Jimmy McGill, Jonathan Banks returns as Mike Ehrmantraut, Rhea Seehorn returns as Kim Wexler, Patrick Fabian returns as Howard Hamlin, Michael Mando as Nacho Varga, and Michael McKean returns as Chuck McGill, Jimmy's elder brother. can some refs be here?
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Is there additional refs to ref 6 and 7 that apply to the second season?
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Jimmy / Saul is hiding I would say "Jimmy hides"
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * is there a better source than newscastic for ref 7?
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:26, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * ref 8 publisher link is incorrect and not necessary (variety is okay alone)
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * if the cast (particularly the guest stars) had references for an episode they were in I think that would improve this article
 * who previously appeared in the Breaking Bad episode "Open House". this is probably not indicated in the episode. is there a source?
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:26, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * reference works should be linked to available articles
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:06, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * plot summary for episodess 6, 7, 8 are over 200 max words in MOS:TVPLOT
 * he's he is
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * claims to the DA not everyone knows what a DA is (link/unabbreviate)
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * he’s retiring MOS:CONTRACTIONS, also watch the quote mark (MOS:CURLY)
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * live aftershow MOS:SEAOFBLUE
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 18:58, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * second-season this is an odd form
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * use author-link=Mitch Metcalf in citations
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * SHOWBUZZDAILY’s it's okay to de-capitalize this (MOS:CAPS; also the full title includes "Updated:"
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * much like the previous is there a ref
 * ✅ The Optimistic One (talk) 18:13, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * "Better Call Saul : Season 2" why is there a space after Saul
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * gave the season as a whole 8.7/10 rated the season an 8.7 out of 10. (I think "out of" is okay)
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * precision." the sentence doesn't end with "precision"; quote inside period.
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * second season, Better second season ... Better (there's a part of the sentence cut out here
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * praised the show be more specific
 * ✅ The Optimistic One (talk) 18:13, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * 1 Live +7 ratings were not available, so Live +3 ratings have been used instead. consider writing "Live + seven-day DVR playback viewership was unavailable, so live + three-day is listed instead" for people unfamiliar with the term "Live + 7"
 * ✅ The Optimistic One (talk) 18:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * Emmys.com consider publisher=Academy of Television Arts & Sciences instead
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)


 * second-season (season two or second season or second season's is clearer)
 * ✅ Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Placing on hold for seven days pending implementation of most suggestions above. Heartfox (talk) 05:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)