Talk:Better Off Ted/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- Cirt (talk) 17:59, 20 December 2010 (UTC)
 * I will review this article. -- Cirt (talk) 17:59, 20 December 2010 (UTC)


 * There's no reviewing going on here at all. Maybe it may be better to let someone else take the review? RAIN..the..ONE  HOTLINE 13:10, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll review this article, since it doesn't look like Cirt will get to it. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 23:36, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found with the article: *Addressed. User:AndrewAllen15 *Added a citation for Ted's daughter. However, couldn't find sources for recurring characters, so moved them to character page. User:AndrewAllen15 *Changed to talkative. User:AndrewAllen15 *Removed all the dead links. User:AndrewAllen15 *Fixed the Malcolm Barrett link. User:AndrewAllen15 I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. If they're not fixed within a week, the article will be failed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:49, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
 * "Fresco has stated that he himself doesn't like the show's title, but hasn't spoken of changing it." hadn't; make sure everything's past tense.
 * I'd prefer citations for recurring characters + ted's daughter, as they currently don't have any.
 * "Ryan is garrulous person," is a
 * There are a myriad of deadlinks; see here
 * Malcolm Barrett is a disambiguation page in the casting section.

Looks good. I have one more remaining concern after double-checking the article. The ratings table feels a bit out of place; it would fit better in the list of episodes for the series. A paragraph could then be added in the reception regarding its ratings. I'll leave this up to you but I think it would work better. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:59, 13 January 2011 (UTC) *I moved the ratings section to the episodes page. I'll work on making a ratings paragraph. User:AndrewAllen15

Everything checks out now. I feel like something's missing since the article is a bit on the short side for a TV series. I'll sleep on it and double-check other GAs. Only thing they seem to have that this doesn't is a section on writers, but the producer did most of that so it doesn't really apply. If I don't see anything else, I'll pass this as a GA tomorrow. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:17, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't see anything else needed, so I'll pass this as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 17:06, 14 January 2011 (UTC)