Talk:Beware of luxury

Peer Review
You're off to a great start! You give a wonderfully vivid description of the work and the symbols contained within it; I thoroughly enjoyed reading the description section of your article. I do have a few suggestions, most importantly that I did not see any in-text citations/references, so I was unable to verify information or examine the resources that you used in this work. I find that it's a lot easier to put a citation in immediately after I write a sentence that contains information that I got from a source, that way I don't forget what source I used or have to go back and put citations in at the end. Additionally, although it is very well written, the description that you have given about canvas, oil paint as a medium, and speculation about what brushes the artist may have used feels unnecessary; there are already Wikipedia articles that explain these things (and you can link these pages into your article instead). I would also suggest capitalizing the "Painting Material" subheading, and be sure to use the subheading font so that Wikipedia automatically puts the little line below it for you. I would also suggest considering splitting your "Description" section in half and creating a new "Symbolism" section in which you place all your information about the symbolic elements in the work.

Thank you for a pleasant read! I really enjoyed learning more about Beware of Luxury by reading your article. Rocky70091 (talk) 05:33, 5 April 2023 (UTC)