Talk:Bhadrambhadra

Copy edit
Hey Gog, how are you? I just completed this draft and it needs some copy editing for grammar and style. Please have a look as per your convenience. Thanks in advance. --Gazal world (talk) 21:57, 7 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Hi . I am well thanks; how are you? I have given a quick copy edit. Could you review and let me know what you think and then I will have a further, more detailed look. I notice that virtually none of the lead is mentioned in the body of the article. The lead is meant to be a summary of what you have included in the article. I would suggest moving the entire lead (which I found interesting and informative) to immediately before "Bhadrambhadra was serialized from ... " and writing a new lead. (I could do the first draft of this if you would like me to.) Another fascinating article - you are doing some good work around Gujarati literature. Gog the Mild (talk) 11:47, 10 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi Gog, thanks for looking into article and for your kind words. You are free to do needful changes. Cheers. --Gazal world (talk) 13:02, 10 June 2018 (UTC)


 * see what you think. Gog the Mild (talk) 13:20, 10 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you Gog. I have moved the draft to article. Feel free to edit it if you want. --Gazal world (talk) 17:34, 10 June 2018 (UTC)
 * It's good. Add a small picture of Ramanbhai Neelkanth and it is B class. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:44, 10 June 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅. --Gazal world (talk) 17:51, 10 June 2018 (UTC)

Image
I like the book cover image. I looked for this on commons, but couldn't find it. I haven't finally approved your DYK nomination, so if you want to add this aa an image you can. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:57, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you Gog for your suggestion. Can you please add the image file in my DYK nomination..? Thanks in advance. --Gazal world (talk) 18:00, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Sorry Gazal world. Once the template is created an image can't be added - I didn't know that. Plus there seem to be some fair use issues over the image, which would probably rule it out anyway. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:06, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Doesn't matter. --Gazal world (talk) 20:27, 11 June 2018 (UTC)