Talk:Big Boy (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Hello, I will be reviewing this article. Check back soon for a full review! Carpet Crawler message me  20:03, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Opening concerns
OK, so far I only have one concern, lack of images. While the article won't fail with no images, I'm just wondering: are there any images of the single cover, or anything similar to that? If so, you should add it. Full review in a bit. :) Carpet Crawler  message me  20:53, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I have no idea, I'll look for one online though. It never crossed my mind. Seeing as it was a very minor record label I'd guess not. Give me a few days though. Best. — R  2  21:11, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Yeah, don't worry. If you can't find one, the article won't fail. :) I'll help out if you can't find one even after the review is done. Carpet Crawler  message me  23:02, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
 * OK, it has an image now. Best. — R  2  14:48, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

GA on hold
The article looks good, and I understand that it's going to be a little short, due to the fact that not a lot of informatio exists. However, I have a few concerns.

- De-wikify "Beckman Junior High". - De-wikify "Ed Silver". - The two paragraphs in the "Leaving Steeltown" section should be combined, or placed into other paragraphs, since they're a little too small. - "Brown reissued the record in 1995—a week before Michael Jackson's HIStory album was issued, a double disk record celebrating his old and new music—on the Inverted Records label." This looks a little confusing, could you possible change it a little? :) - Could you describe the music video a little bit? What was the video about? Until my concerns have been addressed, I am placing this article on hold. I will give you seven days to address my concerns. Please leave me a message on my talkpage when my concerns are addressed, or if you have any questions. Thanks, and good work so far! Carpet Crawler  message me  11:47, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Done. — R  2  12:54, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Done. — R  2  12:54, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Combined. — R  2  15:13, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Better? — R  2  15:13, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I cannot find any third party coverage on the music video, personally I've never seen it. Numerous source say there was a music video, but that's it. — R  2  17:04, 13 April 2009 (UTC)


 * OK, my concerns have been addressed and I can pass this article. Great job! :) Carpet Crawler  message me  18:56, 13 April 2009 (UTC)