Talk:Big Fat Bass/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 14:28, 7 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * What is with the — in the infobox, why not change it with a comma? — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * The song also contains a double entendre gender metaphor sang by Spears. — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Link music critics — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * The performance on the latter only aired after three months due to technical problems — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Background and composition
 * "Big Fat Bass" is a house song that lasts for four minutes and forty-five seconds, and is the longest track of Femme Fatale. ---> "Big Fat Bas" is a house song with a length of four minutes and forty-five seconds. (The last part of the sentence is useless) — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Nicole James of MTV News — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Try to avoid the word 'track' — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * with Robert Copsey of Digital Spy considering the album's production "polished, intriguing and – best of all – fun", exemplifying the piano breakdown in the song, the flute in "Criminal", and "Inside Out". ---> What does this have to do with "Big Fat Bass" — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Again avoid 'track' — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Braulio Lorentz of Billboard Brasil considered Femme Fatale "too much", ---> This reads unclear and vague. Try to clean it. — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * MTV --- MTV News and unlinked it per WP:OVERLINK — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * However, the performance of "Big Fat Bass" only aired on May 24, — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Credits and personnel
 * Looks fine — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Chart performance
 * It also charted on Billboard's Hot Dance/Electronic Digital Songs on April 16, 2011. ---> Tell at which number. — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Link Billboard in the table — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)

— Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * References
 * Ref. 1 - publisher: MTV ---> MTV News
 * Ref. 2 - be consistent in the date formats (since Britney is American use month date year)
 * Ref. 3 - same as 1
 * Ref. 4 - same as 1 and 3
 * Ref. 11 - same as 1, 3 and 4
 * Ref. 13 - misses publisher
 * Ref. 15 - link the publisher
 * Ref. 16 - same as 15
 * Ref. 19 - misses publisher
 * Ref. 23 - same as 19
 * Ref. 27 - same as 1, 3, 4 and 11
 * Ref. 28 - same as 27
 * Ref. 29 - fix the caption per WP:SHOUT
 * Ref. 32 - misses publisher
 * Ref. 33 - WP:OVERLINK (work and publisher)
 * Ref. 35 - same as ref 2.

That's all. When you fix this issues i will pass it. Good job overall. — Tomíca (T2ME) 21:11, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed everything. There is no publisher to Slant Magazine, only the editors. Should I add them? - Saulo  Talk to Me 02:00, 13 January 2013 (UTC)


 * How is this reliable, having been reviewed by one of the site's users called "kozi_kozi_kozi"? Till  14:12, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Remove the link Saulo. The rest is good. — Tomíca (T2ME) 16:54, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Removed and passed. — Tomíca (T2ME) 17:09, 13 January 2013 (UTC)