Talk:Biko (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ritchie333 (talk · contribs) 10:33, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, I will look at this now and hopefully get the review done by the end of the day. A quick look through suggests it is pretty close to meeting the GA criteria, so it shouldn't take long. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  10:33, 4 September 2017 (UTC)


 * "The government of South Africa placed a "banning order" on him in 1973" - any particular reason for "banning order" being in scare quotes?
 * No reason. Fixed.


 * "Gabriel also incorporated sounds into his recording not of his composition." - I don't understand what this means
 * Yeah, not my best sentence...reworded.


 * "Gabriel released the song both as a 7-inch single and as a 12-inch single" - we've already been told this earlier (via an explanation of the song's introduction), do we need to mention it again?
 * Guess not. Reworded.


 * ""Biko" was first released as a single in 1980" - this should probably move from "reception" to "recording and releases"
 * Yep. Reworded.

That's about all I can think of - I've done a small copyedit to the article. On hold. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  16:15, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, : I've addressed your comments. Vanamonde (talk) 17:02, 4 September 2017 (UTC)


 * All looks fine to me, passing. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  17:03, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. If you have any suggestions for DYK hooks, feel free to add them here. Vanamonde (talk) 17:51, 4 September 2017 (UTC)