Talk:Bill Cole (musician)

Semi-protected edit request on 1 October 2016
ALL CAPS TO DISTINGUISH DIRECTIONS FROM EDIT TEXT.

TWO CONSERVATIVE EDITS PROPOSED..

1. FOLlOWING THE SENTENCE IN CAREER, ENDING 60 Minutes. ADD THE FOLLOWING REFERENCE.

NOTE, THIS DOES NOT FIX THE NEED FOR THE TAG IN THE MIDDLE OF THE SENTENCE, WHICH SHOULD REMAIN IN PLACE.

2. AT THE APPROPRIATE PLACE IN THE ARTICLE, ADD THE FOLLOWING NEW SECTION:



[THOSE TWO CITATIONS HAVE A WEALTH OF INFORMATION ON THE FACTS OF THE DARTMOUTH REVIEW CONTROVERSY, AND SO CAN BE USED AS SOURCES BY FUTURE EDITORS (AS WELL AS SERVING AS FURTHER READING RESOURCES FOR WIKIPEDIA READERS).]

73.211.138.148 (talk) 00:35, 1 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Possibly has become outdated. Couldn't find the sentence that ends in the string you specify. — Andy W.  ( talk  · ctb) 05:57, 12 October 2016 (UTC)